Dear Mr. Director,
I am currently working on Master Degree in International Commercial law at Fu Dan University. My supervisor Mr. Liu Mingyu, a well-know professor of law, tells me that SFSC specializes in recommending qualified personnel to muti-national companies and suggests that I contact you for recommendation.
During the two years of studies at Fu Dan University, I have not only acquired a lot of knowledge of international commercial law, but learned two foreign languages as well -English and Japanese. Moreover, I have published two papers in the university journal on problems that may arise after China‘s entry to WTO. And they have been favorably accepted.
I am enclosing a resume, copies of my published papers, and Professor Liu‘s letter of recommendation.
I sincerely hope you wil introduce me to a famous multi-national company, to which I will dedicate myself.
Truly yours,
Fu Jialin
1.性別稱呼不當
不要一開始就用錯了提及性別的稱呼，比如“先生”。事實上，最好避免使用針對不同性別的稱呼，這樣不合適宜，甚至可能冒犯了那些不屬于這一稱呼的人。或者你可以試著找出負責審閱你求職信的人，在求職信中直接稱呼此人姓名頭銜。如果不知道負責人，那么寫上“敬啟者”，這是最中性的稱呼方式。
2.一封求職信不能適合所有需要
你可以在求職過程中準備一個標準版本求職信，但是當你把它套用在不同職位申請時要格外小心，注意不要出現錯誤。求職信中的常見錯誤包括錯誤的職位、公司名稱、日期和招聘信息來源。花點時間，確認你每封求職信中的信息都正確無誤——做這件事的同時，不妨再花幾分鐘時間針對不同的職位要求量身改造自己的求職信。
3.字數很重要
求職信的內容就應該僅是一封信。大致瀏覽一下內容，雖然你希望自己的求職信不是只有一兩句話那么簡單，但也不要寫成多頁的長篇大論。以結構清楚的三個段落概括出你對該職位的興趣以及你的資歷，是求職信的理想模式。過于簡短的求職信會讓人覺得不夠努力且缺乏重視，過于冗長的則讓人心生厭倦不想看下去。